My initial idea was to show progression by depicting seedlings growing out towards the sun. But seems like its too cluttered now with so many seedlings in the picture and there is no clear focus. On top of that, the lack of a light spot (depicting the sun) seems to land the image in a very flat look. I would try to improve on this by having only one seedling growing out of the pot and into the direction of the sun.
I think that would work better for this theme.

For this second attempt, the focus is only on one seedling, hence reducing the effect of clutter. The seedling also seems to be growing towards the light and through this, I hope to bring across the idea of progression whereby a seedling actively seeks the source of light in-order to grow and progress onto an adult plant.
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